Re: poems, lyrics, story and etc about how you view on one thing or another.

bumi dragon lord · by bumi dragon lord on Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:02 pm

karoshi wrote:
bumi dragon lord wrote:karoshi, it seems like you are out of topics already.

poems, lyrics, story and etc about how you view on one thing or another.

story that i mean is your story, not story from some where else.

>nocturnal< · by >nocturnal< on Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:05 pm

bumi dragon lord wrote:
karoshi wrote:
bumi dragon lord wrote:karoshi, it seems like you are out of topics already.

poems, lyrics, story and etc about how you view on one thing or another.

story that i mean is your story, not story from some where else.

okay...

>nocturnal< · by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:28 am

You

You…

Every time I stare at you

I am contented

Because you are everything for me.

Your leg, it’s so beautiful

Smooth and long too

Every time I touched it, it feels cold

And sometimes hot

I love touching it everyday.

Your hand nice to hold

Sometimes it’s oily

Sometimes it’s clean

I love it.

Your hair

My favourite part of your body

It always protects me

Long and straight

Bulky at the tip.

When I walk with you

You make others stare at me

They’ve been mesmerize

My friends love having a walk with us sometimes

You…

You are my lovely girlfriend

You dry me when it’s rain

And cools me when it’s sunny

You…

You are my handy umbrella.

karoshi

30th October 2008

11.07 p.m.

>nocturnal< · by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 2:44 am

Lonesome

Walking through the street

I met a friend

We say “Hi!”

Then, we just passed by each other.

Suddenly, I felt something

Lonesome

Why did I have such feeling?

I entered my room

Lie down on my bed

Stared at the ceiling

I felt lonesome.

I get up of the bed

Turning on my lap top

Stared at the monitor

I felt lonesome.

Why?

Why did I feel such feeling?

I felt so empty inside

I must get it rid off.

I need something

Or perhaps somebody

To fill the emptiness in me

To light up my life

To make me laugh

And for me to take care of.

Lonesome

I am still feeling it

May be it’ll be gone

Sooner or later

Only God knows.

karoshi

31st October 2008

1.37 a.m.

>nocturnal< · by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 2:47 am

i'm currently writting a novel. hope it'll finish next year. it's in bm and i'm gonna translate it into english and may be chinese too. wish me best of luck

BabyTsukasa · by BabyTsukasa on Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:07 am

wah...i've tried it before...give up due to lack of character development...

>nocturnal< · by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:59 pm

BabyTsukasa wrote:wah...i've tried it before...give up due to lack of character development...

i see. what is it about??? may be i can use it to write my second novel... of course in coloboration with BabyTsukasa