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Post by KaKa*HiMeMiYa on Thu Sep 11, 2008 11:24 am

hey... kenzaki... u're his winter mah... then u mah giv him ur kiss lo... i jz like his poem lo... u jealous ka???
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Thu Sep 11, 2008 12:33 pm

wTF, kenzaki you want me to give you a kiss ah?
ok, wiat for me this evening i will go to your room and ahem ahem....
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Post by BabyTsukasa on Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:28 pm

ouh! heheh...soshite kissu kudasai...onegai...iyaaa! yuck, sounds corny! hheheeh
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:59 pm

corny or horny?
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Post by Ms Kye on Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:14 pm

Wei,ppl... can you focus on the topic more? Indian poem tak ada ke?
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Post by KaKa*HiMeMiYa on Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:20 am

yalo... kenzaki... u still wana be the winter rite??? wahaha... then bumi, u mah write one more abt winter's poem for him lo... Bumi... u' re able geh...
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Post by patamon on Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:49 am

Jangan pergi, jangan pergi,
Aku akan rasa sunyi.
Sunyi-saya makan sendiri,
Kerana tiada teman disisi.

Hujan turun malam ini,
Hati aku sejuk dirasai.
Manalah pergi kekasih yang disayangi,
Kesian,katil saya tidur seorang diri.

Cintaku dihancur kekasih mengkhianati,
Tangisan saya tidak diketahui.
Sayang ku telah dilari pergi,
Hilang aku senyuman matahari.
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:38 pm

you come and take

time is not the same,
you have found your way.

i come in and you ignore,
you get close and slam the door.

tear of rainbow has fall on floor,
tear of joy has lost forever.

be strong is what i tell myself,
be cool is not what i wish to come.

be better in life that i will be,
be weak only when we meet again.

stream of my love will remain the same,
stress of our thought will i forget.

you are the one who brings me up,
now you go and tears me down.

will i able to live my life,
i am strong enough because of you.
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Post by freedom86 on Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:24 am

Father,
Is an angel,
Is the guardian of his children,
Is the protector of his kids,


Father,
Is a big tree,
Covering the strong beam from the sun,
Covering the water drops from the sky.

Father,
Is always hiding his feelings,
Never let his family worries,
Never told them whatís happening bad to him.

Father,
Is an unlimited ATM,
Always has money in his pocket,
Always gives his wife and children more sophisticated life.

Father,
Is a life long worker,
Does not stop working to make ends meet,
Does not stop worrying for his familyís future.

Father,
Has a big hand,
Holding his kids,
Walking across the roads.

Father,
Is a machine,
He seldom talks,
He always acts.

Sometimes when u think father is less loving than mother, itís because they do not express in words, but they confess in verbs.
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:13 pm

i some sort agree with you...
your father is a great man...
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Post by Ms Kye on Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:57 pm

freedom86 wrote:
Father,
Is an unlimited ATM,
Always has money in his pocket,
Always gives his wife and children more sophisticated life.

Sometimes when u think father is less loving than mother, itís because they do not express in words, but they confess in verbs.

Yep..you are exactly correct freedom86.
But 'Father, Is an unlimited ATM,' ....

Is it??


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Post by freedom86 on Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:49 pm

erm........ it does mean that father will try very very hard to satisfy your needs. When he has left one buck in his pocket, you ask for it, he will give you. That is what I basically mean.

Thanks guys for reading it.
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Post by redgal on Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:31 pm

Family portrait pink



Uh, uh, some deep da bian, uh, uh
Momma please stop cryin, I can't stand the sound
Your pain is painful and its tearin' me down
I hear glasses breakin as I sit up in my bed
I told dad you didn't mean those nasty things you
said
You fight about money, bout me and my brother
And this I come home to, this is my shelter
It ain't easy growin up in World War III
Never knowin what love could be, you'll see
I don't want love to destroy me like it has done
my family
Can we work it out? Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better, Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out? Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better, Daddy please don't
leave
Daddy please stop yellin, I can't stand the sound
Make mama stop cryin, cuz I need you around
My mama she loves you, no matter what she says
its true
I know that she hurts you, but remember I love
you, too
I ran away today, ran from the noise, ran away
Don't wanna go back to that place, but don't have
no choice, no way
It ain't easy growin up in World War III
Never knowin what love could be, well I've seen
I don't want love to destroy me like it did my
family
Can we work it out? Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better, Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out? Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better, Daddy please don't
leave
In our family portrait, we look pretty happy
Let's play pretend, let's act like it comes
naturally
I don't wanna have to split the holidays
I don't want two addresses
I don't want a step-brother anyways
And I don't want my mom to have to change her
last name
In our family portrait we look pretty happy
We look pretty normal, let's go back to that
In our family portrait we look pretty happy
Let's play pretend, act like it goes naturally
In our family portrait we look pretty happy
(Can we work it out? Can we be a family?)
We look pretty normal, let's go back to that
(I promise I'll be better, Mommy I'll do
anything)
In our family portrait we look pretty happy
(Can we work it out? Can we be a family?)
Let's play pretend act and like it comes so
naturally
(I promise I'll be better, Daddy please don't
leave)
In our family portrait we look pretty happy
(Can we work it out? Can we be a family?)
We look pretty normal, let's go back to that
(I promise I'll be better, Daddy please don't
leave)
In our family portrait we look pretty happy
(Can we work it out? Can we be a family?)
We look pretty normal, let's go back to that
(I promise I'll be better, Daddy please don't
leave)
Daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
Turn around please
Remember that the night you left you took my
shining star?
Daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
Don't leave us here alone
Mom will be nicer
I'll be so much better, I'll tell my brother
Oh, I won't spill the milk at dinner
I'll be so much better, I'll do everything right
I'll be your little girl forever
I'll go to sleep at night
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:46 pm

ku jalan seorang tepi parit,
ingatan ku diketepikan.

putih dalam diri saya,
pulih dalam sengsara hidup.

temuimu semasa ku sunyi,
temuiku orang yang dicari.

sayap kan ku lebar,
senyap takkan ku lupa.

bintang berkelip-kelip,
bagai matamu ku terpikat.

sudah sampainya masa ku balik,
esok kita jumpa lagi tempat sama.

terdengar bunyi bising-bisng,
terpandang juga rindu saya.

lima minit lagi ku bisik,
lima saat jadikan ku bengong.

***sebab, saya jatuh dari katil semasa hendak tutup alarm....pagi ini...
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Post by >nocturnal< on Sat Sep 20, 2008 5:28 am

holy was the star from which you were born

to a world where darkness and fear take form

a lonely soul with a heart of light to find

beyond reality, forgotten seek in your dreams

visit your nightmares and realms yet unseen

you are alone, the last one to be

a representative for mankind to decide its final destiny

will you be saved, or will you stay blind

deep in your soul, the answer youíll find
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Post by >nocturnal< on Sat Sep 20, 2008 6:34 am

Honestly what will become of me don't like reality
It's way too clear to me
But really life is dandy
We are what we don't see
Missed everything daydreaming

Flames to dust
Lovers to friends
Why do all good things come to an end
Flames to dust
Lovers to friends
Why do all good things come to an end
come to an end come to an
Why do all good things come to end?
come to an end come to an
Why do all good things come to an end?

Traveling I only stop at exits
Wondering if I'll stay
Young and restless
Living this way I stress less
I want to pull away when the dream dies
The pain sets it and I don't cry
I only feel gravity and I wonder why



Well the dogs were barking at a new moon
Whistling a new tune
Hoping it would come soon
And the sun was wondering if it should stay away for a day 'til the feeling went away
And the sky was falling on the clouds were dropping and
the rain forgot how to bring salvation
the dogs were barking at the new moon
Whistling a new tune
Hoping it would come soon so that they could die
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Post by >nocturnal< on Sat Sep 20, 2008 6:36 am

Ever close my eyes. Ever stop and listen.

Ever feel alive. And youíve nothing missing.

You donít need a reason. Let the day go on and on.



Let the rain fall down. Everywhere around you.

Give into it now. Let the day surround you.

You donít need a reason. Let the rain go on and on.



What a day. What a day to take to.

What a way. What a way to make it through.

What a day. What a day to take to a wild child.



Only take the time from the Helter Skelter.

Everyday you find everythingís in kilter.

You donít need a reason. Let the day go on and on.



Every summer sun. Every winter evening.

Every spring to come. Every autumn leaving.

You donít need a reason. Let it all go on and on.
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Post by Alan on Tue Sep 23, 2008 3:10 pm

A song I've written recently:

As evening creeps in,
And im returning,
The bright blue sky,
is fading.

And don't you worry,
I'll be searching,
The bright blue sky,
that's fading.

I'll be home, tonight,
Yeah I'll be home, tonight,
Yeah I'll be home,
from this journey,
tonight....(end tonight)

I'm quite new to this. But this song has a lazy feel and relies heavily on its melody.
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Tue Sep 23, 2008 4:43 pm

you play guitar?
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Tue Sep 23, 2008 10:07 pm

season second edition:

blinking star from the sky,
binding sheep from your eyes.

all things come and go,
all must move along.

parrots speak like lord,
pardon if i lost.

season of all set,
makes the different of all comes.

wishes will come true,
season blows the truth.

your love is warm and tender,
my feet is cool and stiff.

changes comes as always,
adjust me if i am wrong.

cool weather is not your cause,
cooling my heat is your bless.

warm is just alternative,
humor is you true nature.

i like you not because you change for always,
i like you is because of your personality.
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Post by KaKa*HiMeMiYa on Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:37 pm

i prefer season 2nd edition rather than the 1st one... bumi... u geng!!! haha...
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Post by Alan on Wed Sep 24, 2008 3:01 pm

bumi dragon lord wrote:you play guitar?

Yeah i do. That song is just based on C G and Em chords. There is also a guitar solo bridge. Pretty simple.
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:34 pm

well, can you compose the song? i might want to sing try out your song, if can edit for you also lah if got time...

if people like it, then you sell your song o me loh, hohohohohoo
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Post by Alan on Fri Sep 26, 2008 2:14 am

haha. i'll try to record it after i got my laptop back from repairs la. But don't expect too much. I'm new to songwriting.
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Fri Sep 26, 2008 2:38 pm

everything comes with price and some comes with practice along.
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