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Post by bumi dragon lord on Sun Oct 19, 2008 4:30 pm

when the world seems far beyond me,
all i have no place to go.

when my life seems to be colder,
all i see is only snow.

then a song as i remember,
took away my trouble time.

then i fine the strength within me,
to confront the trouble mind.

for as long as i have music,
as long as you are here with me.

that long will i last for you,
as that goes on i will let go myself.

people come and people go,
some have lost and some has gone.

truth is often hurt but its pleasant,
at the end of the blossom.

take my life away so i can begin new,
take it one more step so you can make it new.

affraid not of the darkness devour you,
be brave and confront yourself.

there is light in ever end,
its either you see it or glance it through.


make nothing your obstancle,
make everything your observation.

be brave all i can say,
be strong all i can see.

i just write it out so hope that can get some critics from some one. hehehe
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Post by Alan on Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:30 pm

truth is often hurt but its pleasant,
at the end of the blossom.

I like this line over here, another nice poem, good job!
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Post by Alan on Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:36 pm

I find this poem nice

The poem from harold and kumar escape from gutaemo bay:

The Square Root of 3

Iím sure that I will always be
A lonely number like root three

The three is all thatís good and right,
Why must my three keep out of sight
Beneath the vicious square root sign,
I wish instead I were a nine

For nine could thwart this evil trick,
with just some quick arithmetic

I know Iíll never see the sun, as 1.7321
Such is my reality, a sad irrationality

When hark! What is this I see,
Another square root of a three

As quietly co-waltzing by,
Together now we multiply
To form a number we prefer,
Rejoicing as an integer

We break free from our mortal bonds
With the wave of magic wands

Our square root signs become unglued
Your love for me has been renewed
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Post by psylancer on Thu Oct 23, 2008 6:36 pm

The Reciprocal of the Square Root of three

As twisted as I can be
as the reciprocal of the square root of three

The three that has been out of sight
Doesn't mean that it is not right
Beneath the vicious square root sign
Screw it, its a business I rather not mind

For reciprocating it gives a funky number
Who's name is to long to type here

When (f word)what the (s word) I see
a reciprocal of the square root of three

As noisily I waltzed by
Together now we can collide, oh my
To form a number we just want
To annoy the heck of the SR3, and go hide

We screw our mortal bonds
With the schlong of my magic wand

Our reciprocal of square root three become ended
Your time here is wasted and unrefunded.
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Sun Oct 26, 2008 12:50 pm

media talks...

cool heads down is not an option,
patient of person is wise decision.

realm of power does not tell the truth,
real world issue is often hide and seek.

joy of people does not carry all along,
join in the crowed is often be the fault.

mark my words of hurting you,
mark my words after you se it.

may the bless keep flow with you,
may the fault away from you.

experience is expensive,
thats why it cost.

cheap things does not guarantee quality,
you bought it you will pay not only the price.
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Post by KaKa*HiMeMiYa on Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:20 pm

this is the lyrics for a song which named "you were my everything".. nice...

this goes out to someone that was
once the most important person in my life
i didn't realize it at the time
i can't forgive myself for the way i treated you so
i don't really expect you to either
it's just... i don't even know
just listen...
you're the one that i want, the one that i need
the one that i gotta have just to succeed
when i first saw you, i knew it was real
i'm sorry about the pain i made you feel
that wasn't me; let me show you the way
i looked for the sun, but it's raining today
i remember when i first looked into your eyes
it was like god was there, heaven in the skies
i wore a disguise 'cause i didn't want to get hurt
but i didn't know i made everything worse
you told me we were crazy in love
but you didn't care when push came to shove
if you loved me as much as you said you did
then you wouldn't have hurt me like i ain't da bian
now you pushed me away like you never even knew me
i loved you with my heart, really and truly
i guess you forgot about the times that we shared
when i would run my fingers through your hair
late nights, just holding you in my arms
i don't know how i could do you so wrong
i really wanna show you i really need to hold you
i really wanna know you like no one could else know you
you're number one, always in my heart
and now i can't believe that our love is torn apart
i need you and
i miss you and
i want you and
i love you 'cause
i wanna hold you,
i wanna kiss you
you were my everything
and i really miss you (2x)
i need you and
i miss you and
i want you and
i love you 'cause
i wanna hold you,
i wanna kiss you
you were my everything
and i really miss you
i knew you gonna sit and play this with your new man
and then sit and laugh as you're holding his hand
the thought of that just shatters my heart
it breaks in my soul and it tears me apart
at times we was off i was scared to show you
now i wanna hold you until i can't hold you
without you, everything seems strange
your name is forever planted in my brain
damn it, i'm insane,
take away the pain
take away the hurt
baby, we can make it work
what about when you
looked into my eyes
told me you loved me
as you would hugged me
i guess everything you said was a lie
i think about it, it brings tears to my eyes
now i'm not even a thought in your mind
i can see clearly, my love is not blind
i need you and
i miss you and
i want you and
i love you 'cause
i wanna hold you,
i wanna kiss you
you were my everything
and i really miss you
i need you and
i miss you and
i want you and
i love you 'cause
i wanna hold you,
i wanna kiss you
you were my everything
and i really miss you
i just wish everything could have turned out differently
i had a special feeling about you
i thought maybe you did too
you would understand, but...
no matter what, you'll always be in my heart
you'll always be my baby
our first day, it seemed so magical
i remember all the time that i had with you
remember when you first came to my house?
you looked like an angel wearing that blouse
we hit it off, i knew it was real
but now i can't take all the pain that i feel
reach in your heart, i know i'm still there
i don't wanna hear that you no longer care
remember the times? remember when we kissed?
i didn't think you would ever do me like this
i didn't think you'd wanna see me depressed
i thought you'd be there for me, this i confess
you said you were my best friend, was that a lie?
now i'm nothing to you, you're with another guy
i tried, i tried, i tried, and i'm trying
now on the inside it feels like i'm dying
i need you and
i miss you and
i want you and
i love you 'cause
i wanna hold you,
i wanna kiss you
you were my everything
and i really miss you
i need you and
i miss you and
i want you and
i love you 'cause
i wanna hold you,
i wanna kiss you
you were my everything
and i really miss you
and i do miss you
i just thought we were meant to be
i guess now, we'll never know
the only thing i want is for you to be happy
whether it be with me, or without me
i just want you to be happy
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Post by >nocturnal< on Tue Oct 28, 2008 8:27 pm

My First Confession



A parish priest was being honored at a dinner on the twenty-fifth anniversary of his arrival in that parish. A leading local politician, who was a member of the congregation, was chosen to make the presentation and to give a little speech at the dinner, but he was delayed in traffic, so the priest decided to say his own few words while they waited. "You will understand," he said, "the seal of the confessional can never be broken, however I got my first impressions of the parish from the first confession I heard here. I can only hint vaguely about this, but when I came here 25 years ago I thought I had been assigned to a terrible place. The very first chap who entered my confessional told me how he had stolen a television set, and when stopped by the police, had almost murdered the officer! Further, he told me he had embezzled money from his place of business and had an affair with his boss's wife. I was appalled! But as the days went on, I learned that my people were not all like that, and I had, indeed, come to a fine parish full of understanding and loving people." Just as the priest finished his talk, the politician arrived full of apologies at being late. He immediately began to make the presentation and give his talk. "I'll never forget the first day our parish priest arrived in this parish," said the politician. "In fact, I had the honour of being the first one to go to him in confession."
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Post by bumi dragon lord on Tue Oct 28, 2008 8:32 pm

karoshi, it seems like you are out of topics already.
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Post by psiloCybin on Tue Oct 28, 2008 8:37 pm

how bout this song?did u feel tis song relate to ur experiences/feelings??


MADINA LAKE

One Last Kiss



She looked at me her eyes were watering,
Then I knew that this was about to end,
Frozen in that moment time was standing still,
And I could feel my heart simply fragile.

"Goodbye," she said,
"There's someone in this world for you,"
"So good luck," she said,
"I went and found somebody new."

And I gave you every waking moment,
I gave you everything you wanted and now,
I know you're giving me up.

She walked away and I could hardly breathe,
I turned around and fell down to my knees,
I'm shivering as the truth is settling,
I'm sure tomorrow has nothing to do with me.

So before you go,
Could you just leave me one more kiss?

And I gave you every waking moment,
I gave you everything you wanted and now,
I know you're giving me up.

And I can't lie still,
When there's someone else beside you,
And I can't lie still,
'Cause I'm all alone this time.

(I gave you everything you wanted and now,
I know you're giving me up.)

I remember when you were falling,
And I was there just holding on to you,
And I remember all the scars I wear,
That you've carved in me.

I gave you every waking moment,
I gave you everything you wanted and now,
I know you're giving me up.

And I can't lie still,
When there's someone else beside you,
And I can't lie still,
'Cause I'm all alone this time.

(I gave you everything you wanted and now,
I know you're giving me up.)
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Post by >nocturnal< on Tue Oct 28, 2008 8:48 pm

bumi dragon lord wrote:karoshi, it seems like you are out of topics already.

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Post by bumi dragon lord on Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:02 pm

karoshi wrote:
bumi dragon lord wrote:karoshi, it seems like you are out of topics already.

poems, lyrics, story and etc about how you view on one thing or another.

story that i mean is your story, not story from some where else.
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Post by >nocturnal< on Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:05 pm

bumi dragon lord wrote:
karoshi wrote:
bumi dragon lord wrote:karoshi, it seems like you are out of topics already.

poems, lyrics, story and etc about how you view on one thing or another.

story that i mean is your story, not story from some where else.

okay...
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Post by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:28 am

You

YouÖ

Every time I stare at you

I am contented

Because you are everything for me.



Your leg, itís so beautiful

Smooth and long too

Every time I touched it, it feels cold

And sometimes hot

I love touching it everyday.



Your hand nice to hold

Sometimes itís oily

Sometimes itís clean

I love it.



Your hair

My favourite part of your body

It always protects me

Long and straight

Bulky at the tip.



When I walk with you

You make others stare at me

Theyíve been mesmerize

My friends love having a walk with us sometimes



YouÖ

You are my lovely girlfriend

You dry me when itís rain

And cools me when itís sunny



YouÖ

You are my handy umbrella.

karoshi
30th October 2008
11.07 p.m.
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Post by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 2:44 am

Lonesome

Walking through the street

I met a friend

We say ďHi!Ē

Then, we just passed by each other.



Suddenly, I felt something

Lonesome

Why did I have such feeling?



I entered my room

Lie down on my bed

Stared at the ceiling

I felt lonesome.



I get up of the bed

Turning on my lap top

Stared at the monitor

I felt lonesome.



Why?

Why did I feel such feeling?

I felt so empty inside

I must get it rid off.



I need something

Or perhaps somebody

To fill the emptiness in me

To light up my life

To make me laugh

And for me to take care of.



Lonesome

I am still feeling it

May be itíll be gone

Sooner or later

Only God knows.

karoshi
31st October 2008
1.37 a.m.
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Post by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 2:47 am

i'm currently writting a novel. hope it'll finish next year. it's in bm and i'm gonna translate it into english and may be chinese too. wish me best of luck
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Post by BabyTsukasa on Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:07 am

wah...i've tried it before...give up due to lack of character development...
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Post by >nocturnal< on Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:59 pm

BabyTsukasa wrote:wah...i've tried it before...give up due to lack of character development...

i see. what is it about??? may be i can use it to write my second novel... of course in coloboration with BabyTsukasa
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